Tuesday, September 6, 2011

Insurance e-mail

Overall the insurance e-mail is very confusing and unclear.  The writer tried explaining the new way they will use e-mails, but does it in a terrible way that I found myself lost many times through out the e-mail.  They used long words, technical words and initials which threw me off.  The writer of this e-mail should have used short words, and familiar words so multiple readers could understand it more.  They should have also explained the new system for e-mail in a short and quick way instead of dragging the process out.

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