Tuesday, October 18, 2011

Persuasive Writing

The persuasive letter I found is from a hotel persuading its audience with a relaxing vacation at their facility. The audience in this letter is to a business man. The approach to the audience is about taking a break from work and their home life by escaping to this hotel for a relaxing vacation that will change their stressful mood to an easy a carefree one. The way the person writes this message is basically saying "you have to take this opportunity to be relaxed". They refer their hotel to the BEST one out there in all ways including best service, best food, and everything else. I think this approach is decent, but it is just like other hotel offers. To improve this letter, the writer should specifically explain why their hotel is the best and exactly what they can offer their audience.

http://www.buzzle.com/articles/persuasive-business-letter-example.html

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